The Bread & Roses Theatre

Innovative & award-winning fringe theatre in Clapham, upstairs at The Bread & Roses Pub


  • Home
  • Donations
  • What's On
  • Opportunities
    • Bring a Show
    • Networking Event
    • Newsletters
    • Equal Opportunities Policy
  • About
    • Theatre
    • Team
    • News
    • Find Us
  • Playwriting
    • Writers Membership
    • Playwrights Circle
    • Playwriting Course - BREAD & PROSES
    • Script Doctor
    • Playwriting Award >
      • Playwriting Award 2023/2024
      • Playwriting Award 2018/2019
      • Playwriting Award 2016/2017
      • Playwriting Competition 2015
    • Publications
    • Short Plays for The Platform
  • Home
  • Donations
  • What's On
  • Opportunities
    • Bring a Show
    • Networking Event
    • Newsletters
    • Equal Opportunities Policy
  • About
    • Theatre
    • Team
    • News
    • Find Us
  • Playwriting
    • Writers Membership
    • Playwrights Circle
    • Playwriting Course - BREAD & PROSES
    • Script Doctor
    • Playwriting Award >
      • Playwriting Award 2023/2024
      • Playwriting Award 2018/2019
      • Playwriting Award 2016/2017
      • Playwriting Competition 2015
    • Publications
    • Short Plays for The Platform

A Writer's thoughts – 'Maisie' by Roger Goldsmith

25/11/2019

2 Comments

 
Picture
When I started writing plays I wrote conventional plays, mostly based on real life situations, stories I came across, or read about, sometimes with lots of characters, sometimes not.
'It Started With A Touch' a play about a Mother who witnesses her son beating up an innocent man, reporting him to the police, and her son being sent to prison, was my first London production, part of Wimbledon Studio's Fresh Ideas, and later ' Runaway' a two- hander loosely based on the Jeremy Forrest situation, a schoolteacher eloping with a schoolgirl to France, produced by Small But Mighty Theatre in Toronto.
It wasn't until I met Colin Burden the Artistic Director of The Bootleg Theatre Company in Salisbury that I ever regarded monologues as plays, or could be, that they could have value dramatically. It was something I had never considered. Who would want to come watch one person on a stage telling a story? Where's the 'drama' in that? What's the point? You may as well read a book or listen to the radio!
But I thought I'd give it a try. I wrote a play called 'Torched' sent it to Colin, he liked it and together with another monologue by Annie L Cooper entitled 'Cookie' forming a double bill under the title
of 'Deal With It', it was staged at Barons Court Theatre and toured the south west, very successfully and got great reviews.

It was followed by another monologue I wrote entitled 'Birth' about a lonely vicar's daughter, a virgin, who is raped , gets pregnant and has the child of her attacker, and her life is changed for the better because of it, winner of the Lost Theatre's One Act play festival, and perhaps the most successful to date. And 'Brotherly Love' about a brother's unhealthy love for his sister, which played at Barons Court a while back. I began to see the value in monologues. They weren't such a bad idea after all. And far better writers than me had proved they worked.

PictureRoger Goldsmith
One of the most successful monologues of recent times is Simon Stephens' 'Sea Wall' written for the Bush Theatre in 2008 and performed by Andrew Scott, revived in 2018 at the Old Vic, with a US premiere in New York in 2019, with Tom Sturridge playing the character Alex.
Indeed the idea for 'Maisie' I believe was consciously or unconsciously conceived as a result of that. (writers are the biggest thieves out there) The stories are similar. But told in a very different way.

I now 'see things' very differently in terms of the representation of a story, its structure and form. As part of the Royal Court writers' group of 2016, I learnt that it was important when you had an idea, to consider various ways of telling your story, don't necessarily write it the way you initially see it, but wait, let it develop a bit, and discover the best way dramatically to represent it.
Whilst I think or I hope 'Maisie' works as a monologue, it could easily be a five or six character play, as Dan Reegan in the play, talks about other people he comes across, and speaks their words. And run for 90 minutes rather than 50.

PictureGwenan Bain
I now naturally think fringe venue and minimal set and minimal characters as a first off when I think of a story. And work from there. It does not mean I will only ever write monologues or plays with very few characters. But it's a start. A platform. A basis to move forward from. Think economically in every way. Whilst it is great to have full scale productions with large casts at the National Theatre, with full blown sets, it's not really where I see things going. And I'm not sure I want that anyway. Fringe theatre is so much more intimate and personal. I love fringe theatre. Watching audiences as I do, it's great to be able to see the reaction on people's faces to what you write, when you're up close to them, there is so much pleasure in that.
Creatives involved:-
I consider myself lucky to have 'found' Gwenan Bain as a director for 'Masie'. She's a very talented young director with great vision, and I believe a great future. I was so impressed with the way she dealt with actors who auditioned for the part, her methodology, the way she encouraged them to be in different situations to that depicted in 'Maisie'. It was a real eye opener to me.

PictureSteve Blacker
There were some excellent actors who auditioned for the part of Dan Reegan, but when I saw the self-tape of Steve Blacker, I knew he was the actor who would work best. At the rehearsal I attended Steve asked lots of questions about Dan , and really got me thinking about the character. Mods were made to the script and the play better as a result of it. Again an eye opener to me.
'Maisie' – the beginnings of. (Spoiler alert)
I had the idea for a play about a Father taking his young daughter to London for the day where she is involved in a tragic accident, about a year ago. The play I initially entitled 'Afters'. It was going to be about a Father getting revenge on the driver of a van who falls asleep at the wheel, knocks over and kills his daughter. And how the Father waits for the man to leave prison to get his revenge and maybe kills him. It went no further than some random scenes and I stopped working on it. I came back to it earlier this year and questioned who the driver might be, what were the circumstances that led to the incident, why did he fall asleep at the wheel, where was he going? I had some answers to those questions and completed the play and the result is 'Maisie'.
I hope you enjoy it.

Maisie runs 3 - 7 December at 7:30pm - BOOK NOW


2 Comments
Derek Webb link
26/11/2019 12:05:37 am

Fascinating insight into the background to a play and how an idea is born, changes shape and alters until the final script emerges

Reply
Jayne Woodhouse link
27/11/2019 01:50:27 am

Very interesting and reflective view on the writer's journey and the importance of fringe theatre in shaping narrative and structure. I'd never really thought of monologues in such a positive way before and I've found this particularly helpful.

Reply

Your comment will be posted after it is approved.


Leave a Reply.

    News



    RSS Feed


The Bread & Roses Theatre
68 Clapham Manor Street, Clapham SW4 6DZ, London

Ticket purchases are non refundable. Concession prices apply to students; under 18s; pensioners; those on disability and unemployment benefits; Equity, BECTU & SDUK members; Portico Places cardholders. ​As a young venue we are still upgrading and developing the space, any additional donations are much appreciated and will be used towards improving the theatre even further and keeping the venue going in the long-term.


Donate

Recipient of:
Picture
Picture
Picture
Commended "Most Innovative Arts Project"  2018

Picture
Picture
Picture
Recommended by:
Picture
Picture
Featured on:
Picture
Upstairs at:
Picture
Listed on:
Picture
Picture

​Phone: 020 8050 3025 | [email protected]
© The Bread & Roses Theatre Company (
Company Number 9700840), 2012-2022 | Disclaimer/Privacy Policy


Supported  using funding by:
Picture
Picture
Picture